Contents Draft 1

Contents page has worked well because I have included images of Abbie Reid the artist who is the main feature of the double page spread, I have also included an image of  gig on page '18' for the gig guide article. I have used margins to keep the information neat, and for the editors letter I have taken a photo of the 'editor' and created a signature on paint. Therefore I feel my page looks pretty realistic.

• However improvements from the front page that were suggested were that the 'Urban Sound this week..' text had been cut off
• Also the Editor letter's title should be changed to 'Editor's letter' instead of Editor letter
• Another improvement was to crop the image of the editor
• The 'Hey Guys' also meant that it was specifically talking to the male gender
• The text was also too large on the page so I will change it to a smaller font
• And also I should try to tackle the issue of the white space
• 2 Pictures of the star 'Abbie Reid' is quite strange as most magazines do not have images of the same artist, so I should aim to vary this by taking appropriate images of other artists
• I should also change the awkward expression of 'In 6 months of activity' and should aim to introduce the star in a better way
• Also comparing 'Abbie Reid' to Amy Winehouse would be a case of slander so therefore I should completely remove this comment
• Page Numbers only go up to 23 which would mean it is a short magazine, also meaning my price would be accurate
• Page Numbers are also not consequitive meaning there has been no room for all the adverts